The table below shows the wordwide market share of notebook computer manufacturers in the year 2006,2007 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons wherere levant.

The table below shows the wordwide market share of notebook computer manufacturers in the year 2006,2007 and 2014. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons wherere levant.
The chart gives the information about market share of different notebook computer
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2006,2007 and 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportion of HP company was always the highest in the chart during these three years,
while
that of Fujitsu company was always the smallest. As is shown in the table,the figures of HP,Dell,Samsung,Toshiba and Lenovo all increased generally in the shown year.Standing at the data of 16.6% in 2006,Dell experienced
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significant growth and
finally
accounted for 26.12% in 2014.In terms of HP,Samsung and Toshiba,these data all rose slightly throughout the
period
,becoming 34.25%,14.20% and 8.12% respectively in 2003.Hitting its bottom at 6.2% in 2007,the figure
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Lenovo dropped a little at first
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but increased to 7.10% in the end.
However
,there was a dramatic fluctuation happened to the number of Fujitsu,it dropped sharply in the first
period
,but increased to 3.1% in the end.
In addition
,we can witness a decline in the percentage of Others,but to a more rapid degree,from 22.8% to 7.11% throughout the whole
period
.
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