The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of youngsters by
choose
numerous ways to combat climate change and Wrong verb form
chose
global
warming Correct article usage
the global
problem
in Fix the agreement mistake
problems
the
Portugal,Correct article usage
apply
Poland
,Romania and Holand in 2008.
The majority of young people showed interest in Portugal in all types. However
,Romanian folks showed less interest.
Individuals of Portugal most used lifestyle methods with the help of government and modern technology
to uproot the problem with a majority of nearly 40 % in all the sectors.In addition
,Romania took part in every method but never crossed 20 % in every way.Furthermore
, Government
way was too popular in Correct article usage
the Government
Poland
and Portugal ,but advanced technology
only
famous in Portugal.All four countries Add a missing verb
was only
also
paid attention other
ways to solve the problem with nearly 25%.Change preposition
to other
Although
technology
method was Correct article usage
the technology
uncomman
in Correct your spelling
uncommon
Poland
.
To sum up
, Romania and Poland
focused more on technology
as well as
lifestyle,while
Portugal focused only on lifestyle to combat Global warming.Submitted by jagdeeptoor751 on
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