The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of youngsters by
choose
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chose
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numerous ways to combat climate change and
global
Correct article usage
the global
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warming
problem
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problems
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in
the
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apply
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Portugal,
Poland
,Romania and Holand in 2008. The majority of young people showed interest in Portugal in all types.
However
,Romanian folks showed less interest. Individuals of Portugal most used lifestyle methods with the help of government and modern
technology
to uproot the problem with a majority of nearly 40 % in all the sectors.
In addition
,Romania took part in every method but never crossed 20 % in every way.
Furthermore
,
Government
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the Government
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way was too popular in
Poland
and Portugal ,but advanced
technology
only
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was only
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famous in Portugal.All four countries
also
paid attention
other
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to other
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ways to solve the problem with nearly 25%.
Although
technology
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the technology
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method was
uncomman
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uncommon
in
Poland
.
To sum up
, Romania and
Poland
focused more on
technology
as well as
lifestyle,
while
Portugal focused only on lifestyle to combat Global warming.
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