The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given tables illustrate the revenues in millions of euros made by selling bananas and coffee in 1999 and 2004 among five European states like United Kindom, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Firstly
, regarding coffee, in the UK only, 1.5 million
euros were made in 1999 thanks to this
beverage. Afterwards, in 2004 the earnings rose vertiginously high, reaching 20 million
! Similarly
, in Belgium
it doubled its value in Add a comma
Belgium,
this
five-year period starting at three million
,
and arriving at six. Even if smaller, the same trend is Remove the comma
apply
also
shown in the other countries taken in exam
, where the earnings increased over the years.
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Lastly
, bananas were even more profitable! Switzerland is the country which enjoys them the most. This
product in 1999 was worth 15 million
, while
five years after went straight up to 47 million
! Furthermore
, the UK and Belgium also
shared the same passion for the yellow fruit since in these countries the sales increased. On the other hand
, Sweden and Denmark had an opposite trend, where this
food lowered its sales during the examined period.Submitted by alessandro.talese on
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