The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows percentages of young people choosing different ways to solve the global warming in four different countries in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the data about the chosen ways ,including
life style
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lifestyle
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,
govermment
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government
regulations , advanced technology and none of these, by four countries' children to
overcom
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overcome
global warming in 2008.
Overall
, remarkable information can be observed,
in
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Portugal showing the highest percentage across all categories compared to other countries,
while
Romania
shows average percentages. Poland and the Holand each have the second-highest proportion in two different categories. In the category of "Lifestyle," Portugal had the highest proportion at around 40%, followed by Poland at approximately 30%. Meanwhile,
Romania
and the Netherlands showed lower percentages, with
Romania
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over 20% and the Netherlands at about 10%.
This
pattern is
similarly
reflected in the "Government Regulations" category.
In contrast
, in the category of "Advanced Technology," Portugal maintained its dominance with over 35%,
while
the Netherlands came in second with about 30%, marking a significant increase compared to the other categories. Poland and
Romania
,
on the other hand
, had much lower percentages, each below 20%.
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