4.The diagram below shows the changes that have taken place at west park secondary school since its construction in 1950. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps presented describe how West Park Secondary School changed in time after its construction in 1950, the situations in 1980 and 2010 are

also

reported.

Overall

it is clear that

the main road and the main building have never been moved or modified over the years, despite,

this

can not be said about all the other structures. The playground conserved its place and dimension through time, until 2010 when it was reduced in space. Whilst, both the houses and the farmland that were positioned in 1950 on the left side were replaced , the first with a car park and a science block, and the second with a sports field, in 1980.

To conclude

, in recent years, from 1980 to 2010, the science block remained steady, despite, the parking lot having been expanded resulting in a smaller sports field.

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