The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A1
The map
illustrate
road admission to a Change the verb form
illustrates
City
Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, moving by transport significantly expanded in this
city
. Population
in the Correct article usage
The population
City
Hospital was
increased.
People Unnecessary verb
apply
Started
to move by bus. It was the most convenient way to provide people. Fix capitalization
started
In
addition
we have alerts Add a comma
addition,
of
roads in order to avoid traffic jams. Change preposition
on
Car
parks separated
so that Add a missing verb
are separated
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
could
accommodate all cars. From 2007 to 2010 in a Wrong verb form
can
City
Hospital bus stops were removed and replaced to the bus station in the southwest corner. By 2010 car
parks divided
into two groups staff Add a missing verb
were divided
car
park
and public Fix the agreement mistake
parks
car
park
. Fix the agreement mistake
parks
City
Hospital stayed in the same place as was before.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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