The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2
Both maps represent
road
Add an article
the road
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to the
city
hospital and changes in three years.
It is clear that
there is
new
Correct article usage
a new
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car
park
and bus station.
Overall
,
in
Change preposition
apply
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the area of the
city
hospital had changed
few
Correct article usage
a few
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huge things. In 2007 there was only one
car
park
for the public and staff near the hospital
road
,
also
small six bus stops.
However
in 2010
in
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on
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the east side of the hospital was added new public
car
park
and
old
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the old
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one became
staff
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a staff
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car
park
. By adding two
roundabout
Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
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to the ring
road
and
city
road
, there is
big
Correct article usage
a big
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one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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bus station in front of the
city
hospital.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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