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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2
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Both maps represent
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road
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the road
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 to the
city
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 hospital and changes in three years.
It is clear that
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 there is
new
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a new
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car
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park
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 and bus station.
Overall
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,
in
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apply
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the area of the
city
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 hospital had changed
few
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a few
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 huge things. In 2007 there was only one
car
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park
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 for the public and staff near the hospital
road
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,
also
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 small six bus stops.
However
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 in 2010
in
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on
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 the east side of the hospital was added new public
car
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park
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 and
old
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the old
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 one became
staff
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a staff
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car
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park
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. By adding two
roundabout
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roundabouts
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 to the ring
road
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 and
city
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road
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, there is
big
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a big
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one
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apply
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bus station in front of the
city
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 hospital.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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