The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2
Both maps represent
Use synonyms
road
to the Add an article
the road
city
hospital and changes in three years.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
there is Linking Words
new
Correct article usage
a new
car
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park
and bus station. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
in
the area of the Change preposition
apply
city
hospital had changed Use synonyms
few
huge things.
In 2007 there was only one Correct article usage
a few
car
Use synonyms
park
for the public and staff near the hospital Use synonyms
road
, Use synonyms
also
small six bus stops. Linking Words
However
in 2010 Linking Words
in
the east side of the hospital was added new public Change preposition
on
car
Use synonyms
park
and Use synonyms
old
one became Add an article
the old
staff
Add an article
a staff
car
Use synonyms
park
. By adding two Use synonyms
roundabout
to the ring Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
road
and Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
, there is Use synonyms
big
Correct article usage
a big
one
bus station in front of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
hospital.Use synonyms
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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