The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. A2
Both maps represent
road
to the Add an article
the road
city
hospital and changes in three years.
It is clear that
there is new
Correct article usage
a new
car
park
and bus station. Overall
, in
the area of the Change preposition
apply
city
hospital had changed few
huge things.
In 2007 there was only one Correct article usage
a few
car
park
for the public and staff near the hospital road
, also
small six bus stops. However
in 2010 in
the east side of the hospital was added new public Change preposition
on
car
park
and old
one became Add an article
the old
staff
Add an article
a staff
car
park
. By adding two roundabout
to the ring Change to a plural noun
roundabouts
road
and city
road
, there is big
Correct article usage
a big
one
bus station in front of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
hospital.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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