Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others,

however

, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving

road

safety

. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is often argued that severe castigations are the best way to decrease traffic collisions whilst others disagree and think that

road

safety

could be improved thanks to distinct procedures.

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using other methods would contribute to

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down some traffic disasters, I believe that harsh corrections are the key

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road

safety

. On the one hand, there are many different systems which have successfully been helpful in terms of

road

safety

gain. Indeed, a lot of procedures were established

such

as laws in which they were created by governments to reinforce their citizen’s security. A good example is reducing the speed limit on highways in several countries

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as

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France.

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decree led to a better fluidity and distance between vehicles significantly cutting down pileups.

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method is not a punishment not even close to

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strict, but

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contributes to

road

safety

.

On the other hand

, rigid sanctions are

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forefront

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road

safety

circulation. We, citizens, live in a society which is structured by rights but

also

by duties. Each one of us needs to drive cautiously and pay attention to the ones who surround us:

this

is one of our duties. From time to time,

road

infraction (often dangerous) caused by a driver needs to be heavily sanctioned because it is the main way to remind

this

individual of his duties and secure the roads.

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, he will remember his castigation and will not infract the law again.

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, someone who

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not

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the code

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got into an accident and injured badly

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or several other human

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,

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not only himself in danger but

also

other humans. In conclusion, even though different ways could be a solution to driving

offenses

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, the more effective act is strict punishment.