Childhood obesity is a growing public health crisis. In your opinion, what are the reason for this and what can be done to tackle this issue?

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crisis, In

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essay, I will discuss the causes of

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problem

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first and

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offer some possible solutions to it. In my view, the primary cause of

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problem

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is the major cause of childhood

obesity

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is unhealthy diet. Nowadays, processed

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is easier to prepare as a meal from busy parents or restaurants, meanwhile, the price is

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cheaper and very tasty. That are reason of people tend to choose fast

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rather than cooking healthy whole

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by themselves, but forget the calories will increase

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. One other factor adding to

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problem

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is that entertainment during breaks or personal time has changed,

children

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prefer scrolling phones rather than hanging out with friends. When I was a primary school student, I always played basketball during breaks, but when I was a high school student, social media was very popular, everyone stayed in their seat and scrolling phones, and lack of frequent exercise

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a factor leading to

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. In order to overcome

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problem

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and make

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healthier, parents should pay more attention

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food

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ingredients. Choosing

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meal which has more

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than fried

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,

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children

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do not eat too much sugar,

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, the school can

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provide

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which is designed by nutritionists, to control

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balance and calories.

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, parents can spend more time with

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, taking

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into nature more, preventing

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from being addicted to phones, and schools can provide more PE classes, to help students do more exercise to avoid the

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crisis. In conclusion,

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it is improbable that any solution will be found in the near future. I feel that the abovementioned measures would be a good first step.