The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates how often
people
in the USA ate at fast
food
restaurants in 2003, 2006, and 2013. The data is presented as percentages of
people
engaging in various fast
food
consumption.
Overall
, the frequency of
once a
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once-a-week
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week
eating saw a gradual decline,
while
occasional fast
food
consumption (once or twice a month and a few
times
a year) became more common by 2013. Meanwhile, the decline in daily or very frequent fast
food
consumption (several
times
a
week
) suggests a shift toward less common fast
food
eating over the decade. As for the category of once a
week
,
this
was the most common frequency in both 2003 and 2006, with around 31-33% of
people
consuming fast
food
weekly.
However
, by 2013,
this
number declined slightly to 27%.
On the other hand
, In 2013,
the
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people
became
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were
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more
common
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likely
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to eat fast
food
once or twice a month, rising to 33%, which surpassed the figures for the other years. In 2003 and 2006, the percentage remained slightly lower, around 25%.
Whereas
, several
times
a
week
category saw a decrease over time, with around 20% in 2006 but dropping to 15% in 2013.
Furthermore
, in the case of a few
times
a year, the proportion of the US eating fast
food
a few
times
a year increased significantly in 2013, to almost 33%,
In contrast
, in 2003 and 2006 they were around 13-15%. In
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, around 3-4% of
people
eating fast
food
every day and never remained consistently low across the three years, for both categories. To
sump
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sum
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up, more and more
people
in the USA became less often to consume fast
food
at the restaurants through the decade.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, week, times with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • decade
  • trend analysis
  • frequently, occasionally, and rarely
  • significant changes
  • lifestyle modifications
  • health awareness
  • economic factors
  • public health implications
  • fast food industry
  • broader implications
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