The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates how often
people
in the USA ate at fast food
restaurants in 2003, 2006, and 2013. The data is presented as percentages of people
engaging in various fast food
consumption.
Overall
, the frequency of once a
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once-a-week
week
eating saw a gradual decline, while
occasional fast food
consumption (once or twice a month and a few times
a year) became more common by 2013. Meanwhile, the decline in daily or very frequent fast food
consumption (several times
a week
) suggests a shift toward less common fast food
eating over the decade.
As for the category of once a week
, this
was the most common frequency in both 2003 and 2006, with around 31-33% of people
consuming fast food
weekly. However
, by 2013, this
number declined slightly to 27%. On the other hand
, In 2013, the
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apply
people
became
more Verb problem
were
common
to eat fast Correct word choice
likely
food
once or twice a month, rising to 33%, which surpassed the figures for the other years. In 2003 and 2006, the percentage remained slightly lower, around 25%. Whereas
, several times
a week
category saw a decrease over time, with around 20% in 2006 but dropping to 15% in 2013.
Furthermore
, in the case of a few times
a year, the proportion of the US eating fast food
a few times
a year increased significantly in 2013, to almost 33%, In contrast
, in 2003 and 2006 they were around 13-15%. In addressing
, around 3-4% of Correct pronoun usage
addressing this
people
eating fast food
every day and never remained consistently low across the three years, for both categories.
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sum
people
in the USA became less often to consume fast food
at the restaurants through the decade.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, food, week, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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