The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The charts below how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram above illustrates the frequency of the United
States’
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residents’ frequency in eating in
a
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junk food eateries through the years. It is conducted in 10 years time span starting from 2003 to 2013. In the diagram, the X axis represents how often the citizens
eating
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out in the restaurants. It involves
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indicators
such
as every single day, a few times a week, once a week, once or twice in 30 days, several times a year, and never. Meanwhile, the Y axis shows the percentage of the whole population.
According to
the diagram, one of the most noticeable
fact
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is that consistently through the years, the majority of people come and eat
in
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fast food dinings once a week and once or twice a month. Only a small percentage inhibits the two extremes: every day and never eats there, which is shown in the far left and right sides respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • decade
  • trend analysis
  • frequently, occasionally, and rarely
  • significant changes
  • lifestyle modifications
  • health awareness
  • economic factors
  • public health implications
  • fast food industry
  • broader implications
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