The bar charts display the average percentage in typical meals of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugars, all of which may unhealthy if eaten too much.

The bar charts display  the average percentage in typical meals of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugars, all of which may unhealthy if eaten too much.
The bar graph indicates the total of
sodium
, saturated fats and added sugars in typical meals in the USA.
Overall
, it is clear to see that the amount of salt in dinner is more than others when compared as well and saturated fat is
also
the largest number at the same hour.
While
snacks time of people in the USA prefer to add sugar.
To begin
with, during the breakfast period, it is very clear to see that a lot of saturated fat and carbohydrates in components is 16%.
However
, the average of
sodium
is lower the most only 14%. Meanwhile, in lunchtime hour the figure for salty and saturated is quite a close percentage approximately 26-30%.
However
, only 19% of added lactose in
this
period.
Furthermore
, in Snake Moment several people in the USA love to add sugar to it with the highest number at about 42%. whilst, the quantity of
sodium
and saturated fat in snake moment is around 15-20%. The biggest volume of
sodium
is at dinner period about 43%
whereas
saturated fat has a 37% net dose. So, the minimum numeral is 23% with added sugars in night meal.
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