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You just moved to a new home and planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb the neighbour. Write a letter to your naeighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come.

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Dear Mr Jackson, Good to see you the other day, how’s work and everything? I couldn’t get a chance to introduce myself properly since I was rushing to work but my wife and I moved into your immediate next house
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 week as I had a transfer of site in my workplace a
while
 back and
this
 place made my commute easy. My wife works from home as an IT technician so it wasn’t much of a hassle for us. We wanted to inform
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you about
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 a small gathering we are planning
coming
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this coming
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 Saturday for our 10th Marriage anniversary. We wanted to make sure that you would be okay with that as the function will involve some dancing, singing, a bit
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of loud
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 music and some games.
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, we do want you and your family to come if possible to get to know about our neighbourhood and have some fun getting familiar with
this
 new place and the people. There are other kids coming over so that George won’t be bored
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 these adults as well. Let us know if you can manage to come. Warm regards, Prince.
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logical structure
Consider structuring the letter with clear paragraphs for each point you make: introduction, party details, and invitation.
single idea per paragraph
Try to ensure that every paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance readability.
complete response
You may want to mention the exact time the party will start and possibly end, to give your neighbor a better idea of the event's duration.
suitable writing tone
Warm and friendly tone throughout the letter, making it very neighborly and inviting.
greeting and closing
Appropriate greeting and closing, adding to the politeness and formality of the letter.
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