In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

At present, many people in America agree with the low of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

banning the travel of

teenagers

Use synonyms

in the later hours

at

Change preposition

of

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

night

Use synonyms

Similarly

Linking Words

I agree

whit

Correct your spelling

with

show examples

this

Linking Words

assertion and

this

Linking Words

essay will examine the reason why

this

Linking Words

is viable

according to

Linking Words

me .

Firstly

Linking Words

, it 1

believe

Wrong verb form

believed

show examples

that preventing

teenagers

Use synonyms

from wandering late at

night

Use synonyms

is beneficial for improving their security.

To begin

Linking Words

with

Add a comma

with,

show examples

increasing criminal behavior tolls is the most important concern. Nowadays

teenagers

Use synonyms

keen

Add a missing verb

are keen

show examples

to walk alone in the late hours of the

night

Use synonyms

.

This

Linking Words

matter not only, causes

variety

Add an article

a variety

show examples

of violence but

also

Linking Words

, causes a lot of dangerous

situation

Fix the agreement mistake

situations

show examples

for them.

For

Linking Words

example

Add a comma

example,

show examples

the

researcher

Fix the agreement mistake

researchers

show examples

are indicating

Wrong verb form

indicated

show examples

that the darkness of

night

Use synonyms

most of the controlling

camera

Fix the agreement mistake

cameras

show examples

not

to

Fix the infinitive

apply

show examples

work and

this

Linking Words

matter raises the crime rate

as a result

Linking Words

it is dangerous for

teenagers

Use synonyms

.

Although

Linking Words

it is said that accompanying adolescents, at

night

Use synonyms

may control their

behaviors

Change the spelling

behaviours

show examples

according

Change preposition

by

show examples

making

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

noise because drinking too much.

Although

Linking Words

it is said that will help to community peace.

For example

Linking Words

,

recentlyan

Correct your spelling

recently an

recently

international newspaper published news that 61%

Use synonyms

Change preposition

of teenagers

show examples

teenagers

Replace the word

teenage

show examples

fights are

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

after 11 pm and

this

Linking Words

matter can create a lot of noise.

Hence

Linking Words

, by enforcing

this

Linking Words

law ordinary people can rest and sleep easily and

comfortable

Change the word

comfortably

show examples

. Adding that they are forced to reduce kind of noise pollution.

To conclude

Linking Words

undoubtedly curfew imposing law can provide positive results.

Thus

Linking Words

, I assume that the law

prevent

Wrong verb form

preventing

show examples

freedom for adolescents at

night

Use synonyms

has great effects on their lifestyle currently.