In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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banning the travel of

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night

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that preventing

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from wandering late at

night

is beneficial for improving their security.

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increasing criminal behavior tolls is the most important concern. Nowadays

teenagers

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to walk alone in the late hours of the

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matter not only, causes

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of violence but

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, causes a lot of dangerous

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for them.

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that the darkness of

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not

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work and

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matter raises the crime rate

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it is dangerous for

teenagers

.

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it is said that accompanying adolescents, at

night

may control their

behaviors

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making

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noise because drinking too much.

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it is said that will help to community peace.

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international newspaper published news that 61%

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teenagers

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fights are

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after 11 pm and

this

matter can create a lot of noise.

Hence

, by enforcing

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law ordinary people can rest and sleep easily and

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. Adding that they are forced to reduce kind of noise pollution.

To conclude

undoubtedly curfew imposing law can provide positive results.

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freedom for adolescents at

night

has great effects on their lifestyle currently.