The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

The figures illustrate the proportion of three distinct brackets of guests to a museum in 15 years from 1997 to 2012. From an

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perspective,

it is clear that

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the total number of visitors increased steadily over the period, especially favoured by senior citizens.

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, we can see from the chart that

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data of teenagers decreased slightly,

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special museum goers witnessed an upward trend. In 1997, the amount of

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who paid a visit to the museum started at over 300

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people,

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rose faintly

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2,100. The trend reached its peak five years later, standing at 400,500. The statics were

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three-time

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to the younger

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special exhibit visitors.

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, children under age 15 numbered 120,000, quadruple the special exhibition that only

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28,000. Throughout the given period, young

attendents

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attendees

fell consistently, ending at 83,300 in 2012.

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, that was not the case for special exhibition visitors, as footfall among

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group saw a light increase to 42,000

at the end

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of the period.