The table provides information the reasons of people using the car in city, and the pie chart shows the percentage of transport namely car, LRT(Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi.
The above pie chart reveals data on the reason why
do
people are using the vehicles in city. It Unnecessary verb
apply
is demonstrates
the percentage of what people Change the verb form
demonstrates
used
for transportation cars, LRT, Wrong verb form
use
bus
or Fix the agreement mistake
buses
taxi
.
Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
Overall
, the most significant feature is the car percentage contributed the highest score. While
the lowest rate was related to bus and taxi consuming
.
It is noticeable that Replace the word
consumption
car
show the strongest percentage which is 45%. Fix the agreement mistake
cars
However
, the number of bus
and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
taxi
exhibited Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
similar
amount with 10%. Correct article usage
a similar
Moreover
, the rate of people how
used to take LRT had Correct word choice
who
intermediate
score which is 35%.Add an article
an intermediate
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