The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, last year
The bar chart delineates the
population
by sex and region of worldwide illiteracy
.
Overall
, an obviously noticeable fact that emerges is that females overtake the male population
for greater
rate of Add an article
a greater
illiteracy
.
Right off the bat, developed countries witnessed only a small percentage of illiteracy
with both below one-tenth of its population
. Other than that, the Caribbean’s male rate of illiteracy
is just above 10% and female
percentage is slightly above theirs. Add an article
the female
a female
Moreover
, Sub-Saharan has over 30% male illiterate citizen
and less than half of illiterate female citizens.
On a Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
further
note, it can be observed that Oceania has less that
one-tenth of male Correct word choice
than
illiterates
, and one-fifth of female illiterates
, causing them to have over a whopping 50% difference in citizens that cannot read. Next,
Arab States has
a 20% Correct subject-verb agreement
have
differences
in illiterate Fix the agreement mistake
difference
citizen
of over 50% for Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
female
and around one-third of its male Fix the agreement mistake
females
population
, Finally
, South Asia, with the largest percentage of female illiterates
(55%) and male illiterates
(35%) causing a 20% difference in its functionally reading-abled citizen population
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