The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
Japanese
travellers in other countries over 11 years from 1985 to 1995, the units of data show millions of people
. In addition
, the below chart provides information on Japanese
tourists who chose to come to Australia
over a decade from 1985 to 1994, the units indicated in percentages.
Overall
, the travelling trend of Japanese
people
increased continuously,
and Remove the comma
apply
also
affected the significant uptrend of visiting Australia
.
First and foremost, the rising number of Japanese
tourists numbers in 1985 was only 5 million people
. On the other hand
, in 1995, the Japanese
travelled more than 15 million people
. Even though the trend dropped a bit in 1991, the main reason can be summarized as that not come from Australia
's travelling. The trend in Australia
in 1991 remained upward. While
in 1989 and 1994, Japanese
individuals decreased travelling in Australia
, this
issue did not affect to total number of abroad tours of Japanese
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