The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected ( as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005.

The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected ( as % of GDP) in five countries for 4 years between  1975 and 2005.
The table provides data on tax revenues collected in five different countries over four specific years between 1975 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
both
Sweden
and the
USA
showed a consistent increase in tax collection, starting from lower amounts and reaching their peak over the years. In 1975, the highest amount of collected taxes was in
Sweden
at 46%,
while
this
percentage was significantly lower at 25.1% in the
USA
.
However
,
Korea
and
Japan
experienced approximately the same percentages, 15% and 15.1%, respectively.
Lastly
,
Turkey
showed 16%.Turning to 1985, the smallest percentages were in
Japan
and
Turkey
, at 16% and 15%, respectively.
Moreover
, the highest was in
Sweden
at 47%.
By contrast
, it was almost similar in the
USA
and
Korea
, at 25.4% and 27%,in turn.In 1995, the percentage in
Sweden
was 51%, which was nearly twice as high as in the
USA
at 27.1%.Meanwhile, it was nearly similar in
Korea
,
Japan
, and
Turkey
, at 26%, 23%, and 25%, respectively.By 2005,
Sweden
reached a peak at 70.1%. Meanwhile, there was no significant difference in the
USA
,
Korea
, and
Turkey
, at 27.4%, 27.3%, and 27.4%, respectively.
In contrast
,
Japan
's percentage was just 32.1%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • tax collection
  • percentage (%)
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • increase/decrease
  • economic impact
  • tax rates
  • comparative analysis
  • data interpretation
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