The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years ni Australia for each year the information was colected since 1981. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows the data collected for Australian

women

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between the ages of 40 to 44, categorized with respect to the number of

children

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they gave birth to, starting from none to 4 or more across four different years since 1981.

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, most

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gave birth to two

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and

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increased consistently each year. The share decreased significantly for the ones having 3 or more

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whereas

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it increased for the ones staying single or having a single child between 1981 and 2006. In 1981, 29% of the

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gave birth to two infants making

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the dominant choice which continued to be the case till 2006 (38.2%) increasing throughout the period.

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upward trend was followed by those bearing one or zero

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, each with a share of 7.6 and 8.5 in 1981 respectively, to 13.2 and 15.9 in 2006, respectively. Contrarily, despite starting out with the second highest percentage of 27.6 in 1981,

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with 4 or more

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dropped in numbers (18.9%) and were overtaken by those having 3 in 1986 (27%).

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the downward trend continued for both the categories,

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with 3

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stayed ahead in numbers in 1996 and 2001 as well,

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4 or more

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now became the rarity with only 11% of the

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going for it in 2001 accounting for the least share among all.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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