The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The bar chart
illustrate
the percentage of the population living in civil areas in different parts of the world.
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illustrates
Overall
, most of the population lives
in the
North Correct article usage
apply
America
and Latin America
during the years. While
the manority
of people Correct your spelling
majority
minority
lives
in the
Asia and Africa. The increase was stable in the all different continents in the Correct article usage
apply
last
period
compared in
the first Change preposition
to
period
.
In the 1950
, around 64% of people Correct your spelling
1950s
lives
in North Wrong verb form
lived
America
, while
a
half of them Remove the article
apply
lives
in Europe. On the other hand
, just a quarter of population
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the population
lives
in Africa at
the same Change preposition
during
period
.
In the
2015 and 2050, the percentage of Correct article usage
apply
the
people Correct article usage
apply
in
all continents Change preposition
on
was
similar. just a little increase between the two years in the same category. North Change the verb form
were
America
Change noun form
America's
countinue
went up throughout the given Correct your spelling
number
period
. Moreover
, Latin America
and Europe they
remain one of the most populous continents after North Correct pronoun usage
apply
America
While
, Africa and Aisa
remained the least populated during the Correct your spelling
Asia
period
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