There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter •Describe the complaints that have been made. •Say why the reception area is important. •Suggest how the area could be improved.

Dear Sir, I hope
this
email finds you well. As you know, we had a few recent complaints about our company's reception
area
. The complaints that we received include the comment on the dull
ambiance
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ambience
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of our reception
area
as well as
difficulty to approach our receptionist.
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The reception
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area
is a very important unit to every company. It is the first place that our customers will come into.
Hence
, they should feel that they are welcomed and comfortable
while
being served. I would like to suggest a few solutions to these complaints.
Firstly
, we can make a few adjustments to the
area
including installing well-lit lights and placing more modern decorations.
Secondly
, we can place a computerised system in which the customers are required to take
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numbered tickets for their turn to facilitate and inform them
the
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waiting time and so on. I hope you can consider my recommendations as
this
can help us to have a better relationship with our customers. Thank you. Kind regards, Nezzy
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Expand on the reasons why the reception area's ambiance is considered dull with specific examples or details.
coherence cohesion
Consider using clearer transition phrases to enhance flow between your suggestions.
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You have addressed all parts of the task with specific suggestions for improvement.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-organized with a clear greeting and closing, enhancing readability.
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The tone of the letter is polite and professional, which is suitable for addressing a manager.
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