When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or bad thing?
When we meet
someone
for the Use synonyms
first
time, we generally often form quick judgements about their character whether Use synonyms
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person
Correct article usage
the person
like
them or not. Replace the word
likes
This
phenomenon has both positive and negative implications, influencing our social interactions in Linking Words
the
various ways. It is a common idea that Correct article usage
apply
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first
impression is Correct article usage
the first
most
important thing in Add an article
a most
the most
the
friendship or any relationship. Based on Correct article usage
a
this
, Linking Words
people
tend to choose if they will keep in touch with Use synonyms
someone
on the Use synonyms
first
day. I firmly believeUse synonyms
,
Remove the comma
apply
this
kind of Linking Words
behavior
is not beneficial for any human being. Change the spelling
behaviour
This
essay will address my thoughts on Linking Words
this
topic and rationales.
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Firstly
, Linking Words
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person
can misjudge Add an article
a person
the person
someone
and lose an opportunity to become great friends quickly. Use synonyms
It is clear that
not everyone feels comfortable showing their real personality when they just met. Linking Words
Moreover
, it’s natural to take time to be close to Linking Words
someone
and open up. Use synonyms
For instance
, I like to share an example Linking Words
one
study Change preposition
of one
of
social relationships in college Change preposition
on
shows
how much Correct pronoun usage
that shows
people
get nervous when they meet new Use synonyms
people
on the Use synonyms
first
orientation day. The majority of students stated that they could not be sociable as much as they can usually do, that’s why Use synonyms
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person
should not pick any Add an article
a person
the person
person
who Use synonyms
want
to be a friend only based on Change the verb form
wants
first
impression. If any Use synonyms
person
Use synonyms
have
an open mind for everyone, he will get more chances to meet amazing Change the verb form
has
people
.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
this
tendency can give a bad reputation to Linking Words
Use synonyms
person
. If any Correct article usage
a person
person
Use synonyms
make
assumptions too quickly about Change the verb form
makes
someone
and Use synonyms
decide
the Correct subject-verb agreement
decides
people
with whom Use synonyms
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person
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the person
want
to hang out, Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
people
will think Use synonyms
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person
is a very judgemental individual. Add an article
the person
a person
This
can make it way harder to become friends with Linking Words
someone
later. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
people
usually agree that it is difficult to be friendly toward Use synonyms
someone
who chose a friend group too soon in the early semester period because they feel that these Use synonyms
people
unfairly treat Use synonyms
other
Change the wording
another person
other people
person
. It is positive for Use synonyms
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person
to take time Add an article
a person
the person
get
to know Fix the infinitive
to get
someone
.
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Furthermore
, I want Linking Words
to conclude
that the initial impression is not Linking Words
imperative
as Rephrase
as imperative
people
think. If any Use synonyms
person
is willing to wait a bit more, the Use synonyms
person
Use synonyms
have
more opportunities to meet good Change the verb form
has
people
and protect Use synonyms
reputation
too.Correct pronoun usage
their reputation
his reputation
her reputation
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