The line graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean iakand betveen 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total number of tourists visiting the Caribbean island
always increased during the whole period. Additionally
, the figure for visitors
staying on cruise ships was lower than that for those choosing to stay on the island
during most of the period.
In 2010, the total quantity of tourists traveling
to the Caribbean Change the spelling
travelling
island
stood at exactly 1 million
. Consequently
, from 2012 to 2015 the total number of tourist
rapidly Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
growth
Replace the word
grew
then
in one period gap maintained its level at 2.7 Replace the word
than
million
. Between 2016 to
2017 it showed dramatic growth.
Correct word choice
and
On the other hand
, the visitors
staying on cruise ships and visitors
staying on the island
were nearly 0.3 million
and 0.7 million
respectively. Visitors
staying on the island
remained the same in the first year then
slowly increased up to 1.5 million
then
it held the same position from 2013 to 2015. However
, visitors
staying on the island
had some fluctuation in the last
two years. Moreover
, the visitors
staying on cruise ships experienced the lowest point of first after facing ups and downs able to record second position. It had a dramatic upgrade to reach approximately 2 million
in 2017.Submitted by cranjal07 on
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