The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduates degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The following pie chart

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the percentage of Anthropologists who

persuited

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pursued

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different paths after graduating from one university. The table displays the salaries of the anthropologists in

work

after five years. At first

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it is evident that most anthropology

graduates

followed a full-time career path. From the

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it can be seen that most Freelance consultants and Government sectors earned the largest amount of money. Looking at the details of the chart,the largest portion of

graduates

chased

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full-time

work

, with 52%. 15% of Anthropology

graduates

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Part-time

work

after graduating,

while

12% of them stayed unemployed. Interestingly, 8% of students continued their higher education, doing a

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postgard study.

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, only 5% of

graduates

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both studying and

work

. In terms of the table,

while

40% of the Freelance consultants and half of

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the

Government sectors made up to 100,000 dollars, which is the largest salary for

this

position, a large number of private companies,

that is

30%, made 50,000 to 74,999 dollars. The percentage of Freelance consultants and

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government

sectors who

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a

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amount of money is only 5% per cent, compared with the percentage of private companies which is 10%.