The graph below shows the consumption of fish in different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The provided graph gives information about the amount of food which was consumed in a European country over a twenty-five year
period
between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that at the beginning of the period
the most popular food was Add a comma
period,
beef
, but end of the period
chicken
was the most popular and dramatic increase compare
with 1979.
Getting back to the details as regards Change the form of the verb
compared
chicken
was 150 grams
per person per week in 1979, then
increased gradually in 1989 consumption of chicken
was 200 grams
and end of the period
reached at
250 Change preposition
apply
grams
. By
contrast
consumption of meat (Add a comma
contrast,
beef
and lamb) were
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
rapid decrease
. From 1979 to 1984 using of Replace the word
rapidly decreased
beef
was a wildly
fluctuation, Change the adverb
wild
then
a remarkable decrease. If we look at beef
and lamb were similar trend
over the analyzed Fix the agreement mistake
trends
period
. We observed the analyzed period
people less used meat than chicken
. Over the 25 year
Add a hyphen
25-year
period
consumption of fish did not change. As it was 50 grams
and remained also
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, beef, chicken, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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