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The graph below shows the consumption of fish in different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish in different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
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The provided graph gives information about the amount of food which was consumed in a European country over a twenty-five year
period
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 between 1979 and 2004.
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, it is obviously seen that at the beginning of the
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period
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period,
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 the most popular food was
beef
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, but end of the
period
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chicken
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 was the most popular and dramatic increase
compare
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 with 1979. Getting back to the details as regards
chicken
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 was 150
grams
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 per person per week in 1979,
then
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 increased gradually in 1989 consumption of
chicken
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 was 200
grams
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 and end of the
period
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 reached
at
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apply
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250
grams
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.
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contrast
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contrast,
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 consumption of meat (
beef
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 and lamb)
were
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apply
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a
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apply
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rapid decrease
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rapidly decreased
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. From 1979 to 1984 using of
beef
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 was a
wildly
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wild
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 fluctuation,
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 a remarkable decrease. If we look at
beef
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 and lamb were similar
trend
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trends
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 over the analyzed
period
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. We observed the analyzed
period
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 people less used meat than
chicken
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. Over the
25 year
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25-year
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period
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 consumption of fish did not change. As it was 50
grams
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 and remained
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, beef, chicken, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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