The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate an industrial
area
in the
town
of Norbiton, and how it will develop in the future.
Overall
, the layout of the
town
will be transformed into a more residential
area
with facilities, making it more attractive for potential residents. In the east of the
town
, factories will be replaced by housing.
Furthermore
, a medical centre, playground, and school will be erected along the road. In the west,
similarly
, housing will take the place of factories, and shops will be built. At the centre of the
town
, a new bridge will be built over the river, enabling people to easily access the housing constructed in the north of the
town
. The remaining space in the north will continue to be used for farmland. In conclusion, the industrial layout of Norbiton will be transformed into a predominantly residential
area
.
This
modernization will make the
area
more appealing to potential residents, with all factories being demolished.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, town with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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