Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

There is no doubt that these days , some individuals believe that the most crucial part of their

job

is their income

while

others think that the occupation itself is the most important. The question is, what is the most valuable aspect of a

job

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In

this

essay , I will discuss both points and draw my conclusion.  There are many opinions about the best choice of their jobs some of them prefer jobs with high salaries because they believe that working with a high salary leads to

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life for individuals.To illustrate , a higher income assists the individual in getting a high promotion and the only method to obtain a higher position in a short period is to complete higher education

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opportunity

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not easy to acquire without money so a higher income can help the

worker

to complete the higher education in best university and get the highest position during a specific period.

However

, there are many negative sides to getting a higher salary in the

job

.

For example

,the load of pressure will be increased

due to

the multiple tasks and huge responsibilities for the

worker

.

On the other hand

, some people assume that the

job

itself is the most important than other elements.There are many reasons to support

this

claim.

Firstly

, the positive environment of the

job

motivates the

worker

to be productive and

also

, helps the

worker

to deal with issues and accept the pressure in the work.

Secondly

, most of the workers seeking the

job

have toxic environments in order to preserve

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mental health .

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many

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the

job

environment is considered the first reason for mental disorders

such

as anxiety and depression. In conclusion, I could say that the

job

itself the more important than other things , because the work environment can help individuals develop their skills in a positive way and preserve their mental health