The line chart below illustrates the amount of worldwide tourist arrivals in 5 countries from 1995 until 2010. Overall, all of the nations presented had seen the increase in that number.
The chart shows the number of international tourists from 1990 to 2023 in 5 countries.
Overall
, people who travelled abroad increased steadily until the Covid-19 pandemic came.
There has been a twice reduction in the chart, occurred at about 2003 and 2009 respectively. The size of decrease
Correct article usage
the decrease
were
much lower than in Change the verb form
was
2020's
because 1.1 billion people stopped traveling during that period. Even though the figures for tourists jumped considerably after the pandemic, it was still lower than the peak. Change noun form
2020
However
, the number of travellers started going abroad actively, so the number of them is expected to grow up
rather than drop .
In conclusion, it is important for industries in tourism to be aware that Change preposition
apply
such
incidents can happen unexpectedly.Submitted by susie0104 on
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