WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates
the
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information about the
Europen
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European
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country and the use of
meat
between the
year
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years
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1979 and 2004 in it. It
also
shows various forms of
meat
like fish, lamb, beef and chicken,
along with
their consumption in grams per person in a week. As far as
the
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fish and lamb
is
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concerned, it has been noticed that in 1979 more
then
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than
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50 grams of
fishes
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fish
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were eaten by individuals in a week. Later from 1984 to 2004 a slow decline was noticed which reached
to
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50 grams.
However
,
consuming
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the consumption
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of
lamb's
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lamb
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meat
was
highest
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the highest
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in 1979, which was around 150
g
per person but soon there was a drop in its consumption which reached
to
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less
then
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than
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100g.
Furthermore
, interest in beef was
also
at its peak, which was more than 200g in 1997. But because of its fall off below 150
g
,
made
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it less popular between 1984 to 2004.
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,
the
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chicken consumption was low in 1979 but more and more interest towards
chicken's
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chicken
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meat
was found in the
Europen
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European
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country in the later years, in which it climbed up to 250g in a week in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, g with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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