The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate changes in the Village of Ryemouth between 1995 and now.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are several differences during the period, while
a hotel, a cafe and some housing are
remained.
Unnecessary verb
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Firstly
, a farmland located to the east,
has changed into a field for golf and tennis, and a forest park disappeared. Remove the comma
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Secondly
, in the south part of the village, there was a fishing port with a fish market, however
, the place was replaced by apartments. Lastly
, the hotel built the parking lot on the right side, and the shops in a row in the past were altered into restaurants in a row.Submitted by susie0104 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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