The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph delineates data from 5
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accumulated releases of domestic documentaries, in a three-year period
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2007,2008, and 2009.
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, a significant note that has emerged is
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E's film-making industry has been consistent throughout the years 2007 to 2009 as compared to other countries. To commence, it can be witnessed that Nation A's production has culminated around 90 films in both 2007 and 2008, whilst in 2009, an insignificant decrease of approximately less than 5 has been tabulated.
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B's analysis started off with 50 documented videos in the first two recorded years (2007 and 2008) and
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rose by one-fifth of the amount in 2009, resulting in 70 released movies. Other than that, it can be witnessed that
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C's numbers saw a gradual increase by an estimation of 5 productions each year of 10, 15, and 20 in 2007, 2008, and 2009 respectively.
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D amounted to less than 25 in all three years, fluctuating from around 18 in 2007, 14 in 2008, and 17 in 2009. To culminate, from 2007 to 2009,
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E has been reported to have levelled off at 15 documented videos consistently.
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