The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts how
aluminium
cans are recycled.
Overall
, the 7-step cycle begins with people putting the
aluminium
cans into the bins and ends with the production of new cans.
This
is achieved by turning
aluminium
back to recycling which can be turned into reusing. As can be seen in the picture, the process begins with the placement of plastic containers into specialized bins, which are
then
collected by bin lorries. They are
then
transported to a processing plant to be sorted by machines. When they have been correctly sorted, they can be crushed and can be dropped into a liquid so they can be washed and compressed into
aluminium
blocks. As shown,
at
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step 4, the resulting fragments are
then
placed into the capacity to be heated and melted at a very high temperature. The next part is rolling, which is 2.5 mm to 6 mm thick.
Then
this
is the result of the recycled product by 74% in the UK to reusing.
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