The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph gives data on the percentage of the population living in
cities
in the period of 50 years, particularly from 1970 to 2020 with projections for 2030 and 2040 in 4 different states of Asia, namely the Philippines, Malaysia and Thailand, Use synonyms
as well as
Indonesia.
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Overall
, the ratio of dwellers living in Linking Words
cities
rather than rural areas grew in all 4 countries. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the percentage in 3 countries experienced only an upward trend, meanwhile in Phillippiness amount of people suddenly decreased in the middle years despite increasing in Linking Words
a
total number in the end. Correct article usage
the
In addition
, the maximum of the projection is expected in Malaysia, Linking Words
while
the minimum will be in Thailand.
Just below 10% of local people preferred to live in big Linking Words
cities
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of
Indonesia in 1970, Change preposition
in
furthermore
, it is the lowest result in the provided picture. Linking Words
However
, after a gradual increase over the years, predictions for 2040 show that about 60% of the population will live in various Linking Words
cities
there. Approximately 20% of the population of Thailand chose the city lifestyle over the rural one in 1970 but after a noticeable rise, their number is going to be equal to almost 45%.
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Although
, in comparison with other countries more than 30% of the Philippines' society was living in Linking Words
cities
, their amount is not projected to change a lot as the ratio is forecasted to constitute around 50%. A sharp surge was seen in Malaysia where the indicator was equal to exactly 30% but is Use synonyms
waited
to peak at nearly 90% in 2040.Wrong verb form
waiting
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