The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates clear data regarding the
number
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visitors
per month in the summer, of 2013 (in thousands) for three different London museums (British, science, and natural history).
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Overall
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it is clear that
the British Museum had the highest interest from people who visited it Linking Words
while
other museums had the same Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
in the Use synonyms
last
month.
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Firstly
, the British witnessed change during the year 2013. The Linking Words
number
of individuals who came to see their traditional country building was 600 in June; by the following 30 days, it increased sharply to 750 individuals. Use synonyms
However
, there was a decline in Linking Words
visitors
in August to around 500,000. Use synonyms
Then
in September, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
rose to approximately 650,000 persons. Use synonyms
Additionally
,the science museum experienced a fall of about 400,000 to 300,000 from June to August, Linking Words
whereas
in September, there was a significant increase of about 450,000 tourists. Linking Words
Finally
, the National History Museum started with 550,000 in June Linking Words
then
fell to 400,000 in July and August. By the following month, it rose dramatically to 450 thousand people.Linking Words
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