The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates clear data regarding the
number
of visitors
per month in the summer, of 2013 (in thousands) for three different London museums (British, science, and natural history).
Overall
, it is clear that
the British Museum had the highest interest from people who visited it while
other museums had the same number
of visitors
in the last
month.
Firstly
, the British witnessed change during the year 2013. The number
of individuals who came to see their traditional country building was 600 in June; by the following 30 days, it increased sharply to 750 individuals. However
, there was a decline in visitors
in August to around 500,000. Then
in September, the number
of visitors
rose to approximately 650,000 persons. Additionally
,the science museum experienced a fall of about 400,000 to 300,000 from June to August, whereas
in September, there was a significant increase of about 450,000 tourists. Finally
, the National History Museum started with 550,000 in June then
fell to 400,000 in July and August. By the following month, it rose dramatically to 450 thousand people.Submitted by sheikha1996mohammed on
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