The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compared the five decades , after that, rose by 10%
families
Change noun form
family's
families'
recyclling
rates in British, France and Germany over a period of 10 years.
Correct your spelling
recycling
Overall
, it is noticeable France who started in
the highest percentage decreased over the period. Change preposition
with
While
British and Germany grew remarkably.
According to
what is shown, France started at 50% in 2005 then
it gradually continued to decrease to 30%Change preposition
in
at the end
of the period.
On the other hand
, the UK and Germany soothed at 20% and 35% in 2005 respectively, then
the household recycling in the UK remained static from 2007 to 2009,
after Remove the comma
apply
his
they both Correct pronoun usage
apply
reach
almost 60 in 2015Wrong verb form
reached
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