The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

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production

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among four

Africans

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countries

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the number of barrels per day between 2000 and 2004.

Overall

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, it can

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seen that Chad had the lowest figures over the period.

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a decreasing trend for Congo, it was responsible for the vast majority of

oil

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production

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except for one year. Regarding

Nijeria

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Nigeria

, the data demonstrated a downward pattern until 2002, it started at 205,000 in 2000 and dipped

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190,000 in 2002. Following that,

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production

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rates increased significantly by 20,000 barrels in 2003, and reached the highest point in 2004 with 213,000. Turning to Congo, there was a downward throughout the entire period, the decrements started sharply

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41,000 and

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continued gradually and ended at 203,000. For Chad, there was no

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by 2003,

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, it started with 8,000 in 2003 and rose steeply to 50,000 in 2004. Cote

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d’olvoire

also

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, showed an upward pattern during the time and

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from 5,000 to 50,000 from 2000 to 2004.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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173 words

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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

To succeed in a business, one needs to know math, rather than soft skills and luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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