The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.
The provided table compares
oil
production
among four
Africans
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countries
according to
the number of barrels per day between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
, it can
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seen that Chad had the lowest figures over the period.
On the other hand
, despite there
was
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a decreasing trend for Congo, it was responsible for the vast majority of
oil
production
except for one year. Regarding
Nijeria
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Nigeria
, the data demonstrated a downward pattern until 2002, it started at 205,000 in 2000 and dipped
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190,000 in 2002. Following that,
oil
production
rates increased significantly by 20,000 barrels in 2003, and reached the highest point in 2004 with 213,000. Turning to Congo, there was a downward throughout the entire period, the decrements started sharply
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41,000 and
then
continued gradually and ended at 203,000. For Chad, there was no
oil
production
by 2003,
however
, it started with 8,000 in 2003 and rose steeply to 50,000 in 2004. Cote
d’lvoire
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d’olvoire
,
also
, showed an upward pattern during the time and
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from 5,000 to 50,000 from 2000 to 2004.
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