The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar charts illustrate the total percentage of movies released and the proportion of
ticket
sold in 1996 and 2006 in a particular nation.
Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
Overall
, it is apparent that drama based
movies were released in Add a hyphen
drama-based
highest
percentage Correct article usage
the highest
on
Change preposition
in
both
years. Meanwhile, romantic films had least
Add an article
a least
and
equal percentage in Correct your spelling
an
given
period. Add an article
a given
the given
In contrast
, comedy pictures sold the highest fraction of tickets.
Initially
, drama
was the most released movie in Add an article
the drama
both
year
with about 27% Change to a plural noun
years
came
out in 1996 and slightly Wrong verb form
coming
increased
to 35% in 2006. Wrong verb form
increasing
Similarly
, 20% of comedy movies were released in 1996 and upsurged by 5% in the gap of 20 years to reach 25% in 2006. However
, Romantic films had the matching numbers of release with approximately 7% in both
1996 and 2006.
On the other hand
, comedy pictures helds
the lofty portion of tickets sold with 20% in 1996 which grew nearer to 22% in 2006. Correct your spelling
holds
held
Likewise
, drama films vended
nearly Correct your spelling
vented
similar
portion of tickets in Correct article usage
a similar
both
of the year
. Fix the agreement mistake
years
However
, fantasy movie
doubled their ticket sold in 2006 to around 7% which was just about 3% in 1996.Fix the agreement mistake
movies
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