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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures above display and compare the layout of Central
Library
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 20 years ago and its present arrangement.
According to
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 the sketches, most rooms have been rearranged for new functions , and many new facilities have been added to today's
library
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. To make the best use of the new
library
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, I will introduce its basic layout. When you walk through the entrance, the place once occupied by an enquiry desk has become a cafe. In front of the cafe original adult non-fiction
books
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 have been removed and there has
added
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 an information desk equipped with three self-service machines. If you go through the self-service area, you will see a lecture
room
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. On the opposite of the lecture
room
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 is a multi-function
room
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 with sofas, where the
library
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 will hold storytelling events. To the south of
this
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room
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, the
library
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 has arranged reference
books
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 to replace original adult fiction
books
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. Behind these reference
books
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 is a computer
room
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.
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, all tables and chairs which were at the centre have been cleaned.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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