The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of books

read by men and women at Burnaby Public

Library from 2011 to 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph shows information about the amount of books read by females and males at Burnaby Public
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