The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. A1

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The map shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Bradfield. The difference between

two

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the two

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sites is that S1 is near to the city centre

whereas

S2 is near to the countryside. But the sites

also

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are also

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access by road and railway. If we look at the information carefully. S1 is

also

close to the housing estate and there are golf

course

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courses

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and

park

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parks

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not far away from there which is more comfortable.

Also

near the S1

have

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a river. S2 is

also

close to the city centre and industrial estate but there is no river near there.

contrast

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contrast,

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S2 lies between road and railway but it would be difficult

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for

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people from housing estate and

also

golf

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the golf

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course and park are far away from the site

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

131 words

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shopping mall
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congestion
local businesses
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consumer behavior
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