The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. A1
The map shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Bradfield.
The difference between
two
sites is that S1 is near to the city centre Correct article usage
the two
whereas
S2 is near to the countryside. But the sites also
access by road and railway.
If we look at the information carefully. S1 is Add a missing verb
are also
also
close to the housing estate and there are golf course
and Fix the agreement mistake
courses
park
not far away from there which is more comfortable. Fix the agreement mistake
parks
Also
near the S1 have
a river. S2 is Verb problem
is
also
close to the city centre and industrial estate but there is no river near there. By
contrast
S2 lies between road and railway but it would be difficult Add a comma
contrast,
to
people from housing estate and Change preposition
for
also
golf
course and park are far away from the siteCorrect article usage
the golf
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