The chart below show the proportion of income spent on different areas by one university, in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts delineate the fraction of money splurged on different aspects in a university, between two periods of 2005 and 2015.
Overall
, a significant note that has emerged is the funds outsourced for teaching and research outweighs
the other sectors for both years 2005 and 2015.
To start off, Correct subject-verb agreement
outweigh
the
teaching and research contributed to a large ratio of 53% in 2005, followed by a negligible drop in the next decade of 48%. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, it can be witnessed that the financial support for students assisted in a small ratio of income outlayed
in 2005 which is Correct your spelling
outplayed
outlay
outlawed
of
5%, Change preposition
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this
amount then
doubled in the next 10 years.
Other than that, money disbursed to maintain the campuses levelled off at one-tenth of the fraction (10%) in two consecutive decades. Additionally
, funds for accommodation diminished by half from 16% in 2005 to 8% in 2015. Finally
, it can be observed that the proportion of income expended on the
administration and management Correct article usage
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rised
from 6% to 16% in the years 2005 and 2015 respectively.Correct your spelling
raised
rose
rise
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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