The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar chart describes a country’s earnings between 2015 to 2016, and the table shows the percentage change
about
exports in each part during 2015 and 2016.
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in
Overall
, in 2016 compared with 2015 Engineered goods and Textiles
all have
a big Wrong verb form
had
increase
, and Textiles
has
the largest Wrong verb form
had
increase
. Beside Petroleum products
and Agricultural products
also
have a slightly
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slight
increase
. However
, Grows and jewelry
have Change the spelling
jewellery
a
Correct article usage
apply
decrease
.
The bar chart Wrong verb form
decreased
show
that Change the verb form
shows
Textiles
has
a huge Correct subject-verb agreement
have
increase
, in 2015 Textiles
export earnings is
approximately 25 Wrong verb form
were
billion
, but in 2016 it has increase
to more than 30 Change the verb form
increased
billion
. It increases percentage
in Correct article usage
the percentage
values
is 15.24%. Engineered goods also
have increase
, in 2015 export earnings Correct article usage
an increase
under
60 Add a missing verb
were under
billion
, in 2016 it has
over 60 Verb problem
was
billion
, has increase
Change the verb form
increased
for
8.5%. Petroleum Change preposition
by
products
have a slightly
Change the adverb
slight
increase
, its percentage change in values
is about 3%, in
2015 Change preposition
apply
it
exports Change the pronoun
its
earing
nearly 60 Correct your spelling
earning
billion
and in 2016 it has increase
Change the verb form
increased
nearly
65 Change preposition
by nearly
billion
.
Beside
Agriculture Correct your spelling
Besides
products
just have change in values
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value
about
0.81%, and Change preposition
by about
earing
about 30 Verb problem
earned
billion
during
2015 to 2016. Change preposition
from
However
, Gems and jewelry
have a deep decrease, in 2015 it Change the spelling
jewellery
about
43 Add a missing verb
was about
billion
, but in 2016 it fall
to nearly 40 Wrong verb form
fell
billion
, Correct word choice
and it
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
has decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
5.18
% in Change preposition
by 5.18
values
.Fix the agreement mistake
value
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words textiles, increase, products, billion, values with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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