The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram illustrates the processes involved in recycling

aluminiums

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aluminium

sheets of aluminium

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cans. The description

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focuses

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on

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an explanation

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of these processes. In general, these processes follow a series of stages from collecting, cleaning, sorting, shredding, compressing, heating, melting, rolling, recycling, and reusing. In the first stage, recycling aluminium cans begins with collecting

of

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the used

can

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cans

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. After that, they are cleaned, sorted, shredded, and compressed in the first machine.

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, the material is

coinceid

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conceived

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heated and melted in another machine. Once the material has reached melting, it will be

roolled

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rolled

to be a

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roll

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thick

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is 2,5mm - 6 mm.

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, it will be

recyled

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recycled

and it has to be a reformed can.

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be reused and it

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reached

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74% of usage in the United Kingdom.