The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminum cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram illustrates the processes involved in recycling
aluminiums
cans. The description Change the wording
aluminium
sheets of aluminium
plates of aluminium
focus
on Change the verb form
focuses
explanation
of these processes. In general, these processes follow a series of stages from collecting, cleaning, sorting, shredding, compressing, heating, melting, rolling, recycling, and reusing.
In the first stage, recycling aluminium cans begins with collecting Correct article usage
an explanation
of
the used Change preposition
apply
can
. After that, they are cleaned, sorted, shredded, and compressed in the first machine. Correct subject-verb agreement
cans
Following
this
, the material is coinceid
heated and melted in another machine.
Once the material has reached melting, it will be Correct your spelling
conceived
coincide
roolled
to be a Correct your spelling
rolled
rool
with Correct your spelling
roll
the
Correct article usage
a
thick
is 2,5mm - 6 mm. Replace the word
thickness
Finally
, it will be recyled
and it has to be a reformed can. Correct your spelling
recycled
This
can will
be reused and it Verb problem
apply
reach
74% of usage in the United Kingdom.Wrong verb form
reached
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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