The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two-floor plan of the public library illustrates how much it has changed over the
last
two
decades.
There have been several developments in the layout over these years, and rearrangements have been made compared to the first diagram.
The most notable change is, that 20 years ago the library had a section
for CDs, videos, and computer games at
the northwest side of the institution, next to the Change preposition
on
adult
fiction
books
, but it can be clearly seen that the electronic section
has been converted into a hangout spot that contains two pieces of sofas facing each other at the opposite side of the room. The area also
has a selection of children's fiction
books
, that originally was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
at
the northeast side of the building.
Change preposition
on
While
the entrance remained the same , we cannot say the same thing for the enquiry desk, as the second diagram shows, it has been replaced by a Café. In front of the Café
it is seen to have three self-service machines, an information desk and a Add a comma
Café,
section
for adult
fiction
books
. Instead
of separating the Adult
fiction
books
and Adult
non-fiction
books
as they used to, today they have replaced the adult
fiction
section
with all reference books
. It is obvious there have been quite a few changes after 20 years, that
the diagram Correct word choice
which
also
shows.Submitted by padosdorka2006 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section, adult, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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