The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of contributions of three sectors-Agriculture, Industry, and Service, to India’s gross domestic product over a 40-year period.
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structure, it is readily apparent that in the beginning, Agriculture made the highest contribution compared to the other sectors, however
, by the end of the timeframe Agriculture was surpassed by the Services sector
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maintained moderate indications throughout all periods.
In 1960, Agriculture played a major role in India’s GDP contributing over 60%, however
, it experienced a significant decline of about 50% over the next 40 years
, ending with approximately 12% by the end of the period. The opposite is true for the Services sector
. It started with low indications of about 16% in 1960 but witnessed a sharp increase of nearly 50%, especially in the last
20 years
, ending with around 63% in the ultimate years
.
The Industry sector
displayed a markedly different pattern compared to the other two sectors. It played a less significant role in India’s GDP at the beginning, showing a slight increase from 15% to over 25% between 1960-1980, then
observed stability over the next 20 years
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