The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
The given illustration
the
percentage contributions made by Agriculture, Industry, and Service sectors to India's Add a missing verb
is the
GDP
between 1960-2000.
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the
overall
structure it is rapidly apparent that the Agriculture sector on
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sector's
GDP
decreased dramatically, on the other hand
, the Service sector
contribution improved steadily. With regard to the Industrial Change noun form
sector's
sector
, despite remaining relatively stable over the last
30 years, there have been very few changes in the first 20 years.
İn 1960, Agriculture played a major role in India’s GDP
,however
, its contribution to India’s gdp
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GDP
plummet
steadily up to its lowest 12% in 2000, Wrong verb form
plummeted
on the other
hand
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hand,
sector
had less
important part in Add an article
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gdp
16%, but Correct your spelling
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gdp
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GDP
negligible
to 45% in 1990, from 1990 to 2000 increased 19% and played a main role in India’s Change the adjective
negligibly
GDP
.
In contrast
to the other two sectors, the Industrial sector
showed a distinct trend, with its contribution rising modestly from 17% to 25% between 1960 and 1980, followed by a period of stability from 1980 to 2000.Submitted by ayshanngurbanova on
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