The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph demonstrates the data about world
population
proportions and distribution of wealth by area. Overall
, although
, North America has one of the lowest populations, it has the highest percentage
of global wealth.
To begin
with, China has the highest population
proportion in the world and it is just under 25%. India, Europe ,and Other Asian countries
' population
percentages are approximately the same with
15%. Rich Asia Pacefic Change preposition
at
countries
population
5% and this
percentage
doubled in African countries
.
The most affluent people are in North America, Europe and Rich Asia Pacefic by below 35%, 30% and under 25% respectively. Africa and India are the lowest countries
with a percentage
of less than 2%. Lastly
, the percentage
of wealthy individuals is almost the same in China and other pacefic
Asian Correct your spelling
peaceful
countries
by less than 5%.Submitted by mohannadsme on
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