Some people think that some type of criminals should not go to prison, instead they should do unpaid work in the community. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays criminal activities are becoming more and more common in our

society

. Someone might suggest that sentencing the lawbreaker to

the

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prison is not the most

efficent

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efficient

way

of managing human resources,

instead

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they should spend their time helping others.

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I'm

concerned that

this

is the best

way

of punishment that we have today. The first reason is that different countries around the globe are already facing the

dificit

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deficit

of space in jails. It is a common problem for places with a large crime rate

such

as Mexico, where prisons are struggling to provide

a

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decent

condition

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for inmates.

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a known fact that most of the time prisoners do nothing but sit in their block cells,

however

, there are some activities that the lawbreaker must do during his

dayly

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daily

routine, which might include cooking,

laundring

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laundering

laundry

, sewing and so on.

However

,

this activities

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are aimed to satisfy only

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the prision’s

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prision’s

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prison’s

needs by providing all of the resources for criminals using their own powers. It seems to be a good strategy at

first,

yet it

do

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not bring any help

for

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society

itself,

thats

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why sentencing people who committed felonies for community work

are

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becoming more common practice

due to

the ineffectiveness of today’s prison system. There are different programs that

provides

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the

as called

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rehabilitation courses for the ones who decided to make the wrong turn in their lives by giving them an opportunity to do some community work for the good of

society

.

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way

they

did

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not only get punished but

also

do something useful for the ones they tried to harm. A second reason comes from the concern that citizens who pay for the

prisoners

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prisoner's

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coexistence should get something in return. It is obvious that

government

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can not provide all of the needed resources to the prisons without taxpayers.

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in today’s

reality

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reality,

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there are significant lack of payback to the ones who actually support the criminals. What’s more, there is a common practice among

the

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homeless people when they purposely commit a crime in order to get in jail to have a roof above their

head

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,

while

that’s a

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better alternative for them. From my perspective, In these cases forced community work is the only

way

to somehow satisfy the citizens who pay for the acts of those people. In conclusion, it is vital to provide feedback to

society

. It is

also

necessary to judge everyone

with fair

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and deliver

most

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suitable punishment for the

lawbreaker

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 actions.