The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows manufacturers' global
market
share of the notebook computer market
in 2006, 2007, and 2014.
Overall
, HP Company shows the highest market
sharing percentage, however
, the lowest market
sharing percentage is Fujitsu.
To begin
with, HP shows a steady increase in the market
share as it was just under 32 and ended with under 35%. There was a 10% percentage increase with Dell Company during the same period. Samsung illustrated a minor growth of almost 3%.
On the other hand
, there was a fluctuation pattern with Lenovo and Fujitsu, as they stood at 6.6 and 4.8 and reached 7.1 and 3.1 respectively. Other companies showed a major decrease in the market
as they lost about 15% of the market
value, while
Toshiba's value increased markedly by 2 per cent only.Submitted by mohannadsme on
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