The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
This
map illustrates the changes that occurred in a village that isnot
far away from London, called Chorleywood, from the years1868 to 1994, Correct your spelling
is not
isn't
thisarea
has encountered a steady growth in population since around 1950.
Correct your spelling
this area
Overall
, in terms of land area, the village got bigger dramatically over time, mainly in the last
shown period which is 1970 to 1994.
getting Into
more details, a motorway was built in 1970, going through the right side of the map, Correct your spelling
Getting into
Moreover
, a Railway alsowas
established in 1909, which serves most of the village.Correct your spelling
was
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