The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the
market
share
of several computer
brands
around the world in three particular years; 2006, 2007, and 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that HP, Dell, and Toshiba computer
brands
showed an upward trend, while
Samsung, Lenovo and Fujitsu computer
brands
experienced a slight fluctuation over the years. Conversely
, other computer
brands
had a downward trend throught
the period.
In 2006, the Correct your spelling
throughout
through
market
share
of HP brand was 31.4% which gradually increased to 34.25% by 2014, making it the dominant manufactuter
among other Correct your spelling
manufacturer
brands
. Following
this
, Dell's production has
16.6% of Wrong verb form
had
total
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the total
market
share
and significantly rose to 26.12% by 2014. Similarly
, Toshiba
brand had only 6.2% of Correct article usage
the Toshiba
market
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the market
share
in 2006 before slightly climbed
to 8.12%.
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climbing
On the other hand
, Samsung's production was 11.6% of total
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the total
market
in 2006 before falling to 10.7% by the next year. However
, this
number slowly rose to 14.20% by the end of period
. Lenovo and Fujitsu Add an article
the period
brands
had a similar movement, their market
shares were 6.6% and 4.8%, respectively, before decreasing to 6.2% and 2.3% by 2007. Their figures, however
, moderately climbed to 7.10% (Lenovo) and 3.1% (Fujitsu) by 2014. In contrast
, other brands
' production had 22.8% of total
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the total
market
share
in 2006 and sharply decreased to 7.11% by 2014.Submitted by chocolate10
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Vocabulary: Replace the words market, share, computer, brands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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